offering help

you can't draw well enough? I'd be glad to help.
Anyways, this was great

Nice

It looked a little plain at first, but I liked it.

Good plot, but annoying

I like the music and the plot, but the pop ups get annoying every time you do something. I do see what you're trying to do with the silent movie thing, but it stops what you're doing. I died a couple of times with the first monster because of it. Maybe make them a little smaller?

Epic.

I played this on notdoppler, and beat it. It really was awesome, the visuals, and the surprising elements you can make. 10/10, 5/5